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Monday, 16 October 2017

1981 Springbok tour

3 comments:

  1. Hi Amy,
    Mum here.
    Like your writing so far.
    It was an interesting and important part of our history.
    I like the way you have set out your work and chosen some cool descriptive pictures. You need to go back and read your work so you can add some punctuation and fix some spelling/word errors. Maybe you could tell your reader that it was a rugby game. Some people might not know who the Springbocks are or where they are from.

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  2. hi amy
    amazing work it was really good but need to work on they way you put it but it was really good.

    from Eloise

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  3. Hello Amy it is Jaime
    It was cool how you put photos on each page so we could see what it was really like.
    Next time you could right that you were talking about rugby on the first page.
    please look at my blog https://jaimec7.blogspot.co.nz/

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