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Tuesday, 23 May 2017

camp reflection 2017

I think the funny ist thing that happened was when bridget lost her show I no that sands mean but we were rock climbing bridget we on the hardest one and she got the highest and when she went fly of she when over the TBC

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora, My name is Amie from Te Waka Ako at Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked how you wrote a reflection on what you liked at camp! It made me think of when I went to camp last year too. Have you thought about checking over your reflection? If you would like to see my work my blog is http://wpsamiem.blogspot.co.nz/. Amazing!
    From: Amie

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  2. Kia ora Amy. I like this because it's really funny, Could u please check your writing because there is some spelling issues.

    Thanks,

    Jack H.

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